天津小学生英语作文结尾段写法
作文结尾和开头一样重要，好的结尾能让整篇文章提升一个档次。本文整理小学生英语作文最常见的五种结尾写法，提供万能模板和天津本地考试真题范例，帮孩子在写作中写出漂亮有力的结尾段。
为什么结尾段这么重要？
一篇英语作文，阅卷老师最先看开头，最后看结尾。如果开头写得不好，老师第一印象差；如果结尾写得好，老师最后的印象就会好。
很多孩子写作文时，把时间都花在开头和中间部分，到了结尾就草草收场——“This is my friend.” “I like my family.” 然后就结束了。
胡老师说：“好的结尾就像蛋糕上的樱桃，看着小但价值巨大。 学会写结尾，分数至少能多2分。”
在天津各区小学的英语作文评分中，结尾是否自然、完整是重要的评分标准之一。今天我们就来学习五种最实用的结尾写法。
五类万能结尾模板
类型一：总结式结尾
适用场景：介绍人物、地点、事物等描述类作文。
模板：
This is . I ______ very much. I hope . （这就是/以上就是。我非常。我希望______。）
范例1：我的妈妈（My Mother）
This is my mother. She is kind and hardworking. I love her very much. I hope she will always be happy.
范例2：我的学校（My School）
This is my school. It is big and beautiful. I love my school very much. I hope to study here happily every day.
万能句式：
- This is my… / This is… — 总结上文
- I love… very much. — 表达感情
- I hope… — 表达期望
类型二：感受式结尾
适用场景：经历了某件事（一日游、运动会、生日派对）的记叙文。
模板：
What a ______ day! We/I had . I will never forget . （多么______的一天！我们/我度过了。我永远不会忘记。）
范例1：一次秋游（A School Trip）
What a wonderful day! We had great fun together. I will never forget this trip.
范例2：生日聚会（My Birthday Party）
What a happy birthday party! I had a great time with my friends and family. I will never forget this special day.
万能句式：
- What a + 形容词 + 名词 + it was! — 感叹总结
- I/We had a great time. — 表达感受
- I will never forget… — 升华情感
类型三：建议式结尾
适用场景：建议类的作文（如何学好英语、如何保持健康、如何保护环境）。
模板：
In short, ______ is very important / good for us. Let’s ______ together! I hope ______. （总之，对我们来说很重要/有好处。让我们一起______吧！我希望。）
范例1：如何学好英语（How to Learn English Well）
In short, English is very important for us. Let’s study English hard together! I hope everyone can speak English well.
范例2：如何保持健康（How to Keep Healthy）
In short, eating well and doing exercise are good for us. Let’s keep healthy together! I hope all of us have a strong body.
万能句式：
- In short, … is / are important for us. — 总结观点
- Let’s… together! — 号召行动
- I hope… — 期待结果
类型四：反问式结尾
适用场景：议论文、观点类作文（写得好时非常有力量）。
模板：
If ______, why not ? Let’s ______ from now on! （如果，为什么不______呢？让我们从现在开始______吧！）
范例：保护环境（Protect the Environment）
If we want a clean and beautiful world, why not start from small things? Let’s protect the environment from now on!
万能句式（更适合高年级）**：
- If…, why not…? — 反问
- … from now on! — 从现在做起
类型五：通用万能结尾
适用场景：实在想不出怎么写结尾时。
模板A（短小精悍型）：
I love ______. It makes my life ______. I will ______ forever.
模板B（百搭型）：
This is ______. Everyone likes ______. I am proud of ______.
范例：
I love my best friend Tom. He makes my life colorful and happy. I will treasure our friendship forever.
This is my favorite book. Everyone likes reading good books. I am proud of my collection.
二、结尾常用连接词
| 用途 | 连接词 | 举例 |
|---|---|---|
| 总结 | In short / In a word / All in all | In short, we had a great time. |
| 表达感受 | I think / I believe / I feel | I believe practice makes perfect. |
| 表达希望 | I hope / I wish | I hope to see you again soon. |
| 号召 | Let’s / Why not | Let’s start today! |
三、天津考试真题结尾范例
题目1：My Best Friend（我的好朋友）
好结尾：
This is my best friend Li Ming. He is kind and funny. I am lucky to have such a good friend. I hope our friendship will last forever.
题目2：My Favorite Season（我最喜欢的季节）
好结尾：
Summer is my favorite season. I can swim and eat ice cream. What a wonderful season! I can’t wait for summer to come again.
题目3：A Happy Day（快乐的一天）
好结尾：
What a happy day it was! I played with my friends and enjoyed delicious food. I will always remember this day.
四、孩子写结尾常见的”坑”
坑1：突然结束，没有任何总结
❌ My cat is white. She likes fish. That’s all.
✅ My cat is white and lovely. She likes fish very much. I love my cat and she makes me happy every day.
坑2：一句话结尾，太单薄
❌ I like my school.
✅ This is my school. I love it because it’s beautiful and my teachers are very nice. I will study hard here.
坑3：和开头完全重复
❌ 开头：I have a good friend. His name is Jack. 结尾：I have a good friend. His name is Jack.
✅ 结尾：This is my good friend Jack. We play and study together. I hope we will always be good friends.
五、优秀结尾”三步法”
胡老师教孩子们写结尾的三步法：
第一步：用一个词/短语过渡
In short, / All in all, / What a…
第二步：用一句话总结全文
这篇文章讲了什么？用一句话说清楚。
第三步：加一句”升华”
表达感情、期望或号召。
完整示例：
What a wonderful school trip! We saw many animals and learned a lot. I hope we can have another trip soon.
六、亲子练习
请根据下面的题目，写出结尾段（参考五种模板任意一种）：
- My Pet（我的宠物）
- A Happy Sunday（快乐星期天）
- How to Be a Good Student（怎样做一名好学生）
参考答案：
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My Pet → This is my lovely dog Coco. She is cute and friendly. I love playing with her every day. I hope she will be healthy and happy forever.
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A Happy Sunday → What a happy Sunday it was! I went to the park with my family and had great fun. I will always remember this wonderful day.
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How to Be a Good Student → In short, working hard and being helpful are important for a good student. Let’s start from today! I believe everyone can be a good student.
总结
一个好的结尾能让作文”锦上添花”。五种结尾写法：
- 总结式：This is… I love… I hope…
- 感受式：What a… I had… I will never forget…
- 建议式：In short… Let’s… I hope…
- 反问式：Why not… Let’s…
- 万能型：This is… Everyone… I am proud of…
宇嘉教育建议：让孩子熟练掌握总结式和感受式两种结尾（最实用），在此基础上再尝试建议式和反问式。多练习、多积累好词好句，作文结尾会越写越好。